Hi Barry,
Thanks for reading.
In line...

> Please expand "VRF" and "PE" on first use.
Ack

> -- Section 2.1 --
> 
>    A router MAY accept a route whose ORIGINATOR_ID or NEXT_HOP value
>    matches that of the receiving speaker if all of the following are
>    true:
> 
> Just checking here:
> 
> 1. The "MAY" means that even if all the following are true, the router
> might still not accept the route -- it's optional.  Is that what's
> intended?

Yup.

> 2. This text says nothing about what happens if *not* all of the
> following are true.  A router might still accept the route (or not).  Is
> that what's intended?  Or is a "MUST NOT accept" meant to be implied in
> that case?
> 
>    A route MUST never be accepted back into its source VRF, even if it
>    carries one or more Route Targets (RTs) which match that VRF.
> 
> I think "MUST never be accepted" is a bit awkward, because one
> immediately thinks of "MUST" as a positive command.  I suggest "A route
> MUST NOT ever be accepted...."

Could do that if the authors don't  object.
I think we all thought is a bit obvious.

> -- Appendix A --
> The title says "Local Extranet Application (non-informative)".  Do you
> mean "non-normative" here?

Ha! :-)

Adrian


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