Andy, Yes you Are right, I forgot to change the revision number.
/Loa Sent from my iPad > On 23 May 2015, at 14:06, Andrew G. Malis <[email protected]> wrote: > > Loa, > > One small nit with your review - renaming a draft because the WG name changed > resets the numbering to -00, so the next revision will be > draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-00. However, the replaced-by information in > the datatracker will make the progression clear. > > Cheers, > Andy > >> On Sat, May 23, 2015 at 7:52 AM, Loa Andersson <[email protected]> wrote: >> Authors, wg and chairs, >> >> I've read this document and think it is useful, and that we are almost >> ready to request publication. >> >> A couple of nits >> >> 0. The nits tool gives errors on 54 lines that are too long >> >> 1. The file name is still draft-ietf-l3vpn-virtual-subnet-03, while >> updating after wglc is should be posted as draft-ietf-bess-virtual- >> subnet-03. >> >> 2. The document has 7 authors, please make sure that all of them meets >> the criterium that the RFC Editor sent out some weeks ago. >> >> "The intent of the author list in the document header and the Authors >> Addresses space in an RFC is to indicate who is responsible for the >> technical content of the document." >> >> 3. Does "across" in the abstract mean "within" or "between"? >> >> 4. The concept "L3VPN-based" is used at a number of places ... >> >> 5. The nits tool give warnings of "26 instances of lines with >> non-RFC5735-compliant IPv4 addresses". >> >> 6. First paragraph on page 12 says "both ingress and egress PE routers >> MUST NOT decrement the TTL", >> The meaning is unclear, can one of them do it or neither? >> >> 7. Do we need to consider IPv6? >> >> Other than this I think this very useful document is ready to be >> progressed. >> >> /Loa >> >> >> -- >> >> >> Loa Andersson email: [email protected] >> Senior MPLS Expert [email protected] >> Huawei Technologies (consultant) phone: +46 739 81 21 64 >> >> _______________________________________________ >> BESS mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess >
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