On 8/4/15, 10:08 PM, "BESS on behalf of Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> on behalf of [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Hi! I just looked at the update in the –01 version that you published last week. I think the general readability of the document could improve. See below for some suggestions. While that is not a showstopper, I would like to see my comments about the Security Considerations (see below) addressed before starting the IETF Last Call. I think the Security Considerations look at lot better. Once I start the IETF Last Call, we’ll get a review from the Security Directorate, please be on the lookout for that — I’m not sure if they’re going to want a little bit more or not. Just a nit: “…or PBBN else portions of the overall network…” I think that “PBBN” should be removed. Thanks! Alvaro.
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