Hi Suresh I've incorporated your suggestions. Good catch with the PE#. Thanks Ravi
> -----Original Message----- > From: Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker [mailto:nore...@ietf.org] > Sent: Wednesday, April 10, 2019 2:06 PM > To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> > Cc: draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-fl...@ietf.org; Mach Chen > <mach.c...@huawei.com>; bess-cha...@ietf.org; mach.c...@huawei.com; > bess@ietf.org > Subject: Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control- > flags-07: (with COMMENT) > > Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__www.ietf.org_iesg_statement_discuss- > 2Dcriteria.html&d=DwICaQ&c=HAkYuh63rsuhr6Scbfh0UjBXeMK- > ndb3voDTXcWzoCI&r=6ArkE4n20mNZQF6JxrMYwJyAGBWWjzhSIC2O3- > fXPV4&m=pzsWkhBzz_3yLDUnmN0UbkPf_p5BADMOhJgrC_0jacg&s=j_gNqE_ > T0Hk311M_869rOxlH7UEi2ibzzk6wcL8OgXc&e= > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dbess-2Dbgp-2Dvpls-2Dcontrol- > 2Dflags_&d=DwICaQ&c=HAkYuh63rsuhr6Scbfh0UjBXeMK- > ndb3voDTXcWzoCI&r=6ArkE4n20mNZQF6JxrMYwJyAGBWWjzhSIC2O3- > fXPV4&m=pzsWkhBzz_3yLDUnmN0UbkPf_p5BADMOhJgrC_0jacg&s=O5fMim > eqIH5jMTUK56EztAjp0d3qRHrPZPf-n2K_T6Q&e= > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > * Section 6 > > I think this network diagram would be useful in understanding Section 5 and > should be moved before the discussions in Section 5. > > * Section 5.2 > > "and no PW between PE1 and PE4" > > Shouldn't this be > > "and no PW between PE2 and PE4" > > as the draft was discussing multihomed connectivity from PE2 towards A5. > _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list BESS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
