Hi Erik,
On 8/16/20, 7:50 PM, "BESS on behalf of Erik Kline via Datatracker"
<[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote:
Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bess-rfc5549revision-04: No Objection
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COMMENT:
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[[ comments ]]
[ section 3 ]
* Perhaps "8-octet RD is set to zero" -> "8-octet RD set to zero"
[ section 4 ]
* Perhaps "for which there is already solution" ->
"for which there is already a solution"
* "from the onset" -> "from the outset", I think
I believe either is correct and I think "onset" is more common.
Thanks,
Acee
[ section 6.2 ]
* "IPV4" -> "IPv4"
[ section 6.3 ]
* "IPV4" -> "IPv4"
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