Hi Jorge! Thanks much for the update.
Roman From: Rabadan, Jorge (Nokia - US/Mountain View) <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, March 17, 2021 7:05 AM To: Roman Danyliw <[email protected]>; The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <[email protected]> Subject: Re: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-proxy-arp-nd-11: (with COMMENT) Hi Roman, Thank you for reviewing, please see my comments with [jorge]. Will publish the new version after addressing the rest of the reviews too. Thx Jorge From: Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Date: Thursday, January 21, 2021 at 3:06 AM To: The IESG <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Cc: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Subject: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-proxy-arp-nd-11: (with COMMENT) Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-proxy-arp-nd-11: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-proxy-arp-nd/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks to Russ Housley for the SECDIR review. [jorge] yes, thank you Russ. A few editorial nits: ** Abstract. Please remove the reference [I-D.ietf-bess-evpn-na-flags] from the abstract as this section of the document is not permitted to have references. [jorge] sounds good. It was originally added to clarify as requested by the ADs, but I guess we can remove it now. I left it as follows: This document describes the Ethernet Virtual Private Networks (EVPN) Proxy-ARP/ND function, augmented by the capability of the ARP/ND Extended Community. From that perspective this document updates the EVPN specification to provide more comprehensive documentation of the operation of the Proxy-ARP/ND function. The EVPN Proxy-ARP/ND function and the ARP/ND Extended Community help operators of Internet Exchange Points, Data Centers, and other networks deal with IPv4 and IPv6 address resolution issues associated with large Broadcast Domains by reducing and even suppressing the flooding produced by address resolution in the EVPN network. ** Section 3.1.b. s/They SHOULD be learned out of/They SHOULD be learned from/ [jorge] fixed ** Section 5.5. s/almost all IXPs installed/almost all IXPs install/ [jorge] fixed, thanks.
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