Hi Murry, Thanks for comment. Please find inline comment / questions. Mankamana
From: Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <[email protected]> Date: Thursday, October 21, 2021 at 7:23 AM To: The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: Murray Kucherawy's Discuss on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-igmp-mld-proxy-13: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-igmp-mld-proxy-13: Discuss When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-igmp-mld-proxy/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCUSS: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The IANA Considerations section needs some work: (0) I suggest making each of the actions you want to take (there are four) into their own subsections of this section. This is not clear, are we expecting to have section 13.1 Multicast Flags Extended Community 0x09 Multicast Flags Extended Community [this document] Section 13.2 EVI-RT Type 0 0x0A EVI-RT Type 0 [this document] Section 13.3 EVI-RT Type 1 0x0B EVI-RT Type 1 [this document] Section 13.4 EVI-RT Type 2 0x0C EVI-RT Type 2 [this document] Please advice. (1) "EVPN Extended Community sub-types registry" should be "EVPN Extended Community Sub-Types sub-registry of the BGP Extended Communities registry", which makes it easier to find. Done (2) "Multicast Flags Extended Community" appears to be a new registry you're creating in the final action here. BCP 26, for a First Come First Served registry, advises that a change controller column be included. Are you intentionally omitting this here? you expect one more column and what details to be added ? ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- My review is not yet complete, but I was pointed to this document's IANA Considerations section from another document about which I had related questions. I'll update this once my full review is done.
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