Victo, Thank you very much for the constructive suggestions for the draft. They are very reasonable. We will update the draft per your suggestions.
Linda From: BESS <[email protected]> on behalf of Shengcheng <[email protected]> Date: Monday, October 10, 2022 at 6:26 AM To: "Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [bess] WG Last Call and IPR Poll for draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-05 Hi WG, I support the WGLC with the following comments. Hope the authors can address them: * The Section 3.2 title “Homogeneous SDWAN” is a little confusing. I lead a team implementing and deploying the SD-WAN, we never used this term. How about “Homogenous encryption” for Section 3.2 and “Differentiated Encryption” for Section 3.3? * As for the reasons of using BGP, can you make the reasons more explicit? For example, using “Simplified Peer Authentication” for the Bullet #1; using “Scalable IPsec Tunnel management” for Bullet #2; and using “Simplified IPsec traffic selection configurations” for Bullet #3. * The document has used multiple terms to describe the SD-WAN edge, such as “SD-WAN edge”, “SD-WAN nodes, etc.”. It is better to use the term “ SDWAN edge” across the entire document. * Thanks&Regards Victo Sheng From: BESS [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) Sent: Monday, September 26, 2022 7:06 PM To: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> Subject: [bess] WG Last Call and IPR Poll for draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-05 This email starts a two-week working group last call for draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-05 [1] Please review the draft and send any comments to the BESS list. Also, please indicate if you support publishing the draft as an Informational RFC. This poll runs until the 10th October 2022 We are also polling for knowledge of any undisclosed IPR that applies to this document, to ensure that IPR has been disclosed in compliance with IETF IPR rules (see RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669 and 5378 for more details). If you are listed as an author or a contributor of this document, please respond to this email and indicate whether or not you are aware of any relevant undisclosed IPR. The document won't progress without answers from all the authors and contributors. There are currently two IPR disclosures. Thank you, Matthew & Stephane [1] draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-05<https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage&data=05%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C15e2a515751c449258ca08daaab23d45%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638009979782265788%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=q1eNsrlS1SUwlFWVtNUy0HAeCNzgo3umOEZBq67lv68%3D&reserved=0>
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