Hi John, Thanks again! Both things are now fixed in version 13.
Jorge From: John Scudder via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> Date: Monday, October 9, 2023 at 2:08 PM To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> Cc: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref...@ietf.org <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref...@ietf.org>, bess-cha...@ietf.org <bess-cha...@ietf.org>, bess@ietf.org <bess@ietf.org>, Stephane Litkowski <slitkows.i...@gmail.com>, slitkows.i...@gmail.com <slitkows.i...@gmail.com> Subject: John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-12: (with COMMENT) CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext for additional information. John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-12: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for your work to address my discuss and comments. I have just one new comment and a nit. ## COMMENTS ### Abstract needs to cover the update Thanks for adding the "updates" header. You'll notice that idnits now complains: Checking nits according to https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist : ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ... -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC8584, but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should. You should fix this by adding something to the abstract, along the lines of, "This document updates RFC 8584 by modifying the definition of the DF Election Extended Community." ## NITS ### Section 4.1 "The procedures for the used of the DP bit" -- s/used/use/
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