Hi Mohamed, Thanks for your comment. Will be sending an updated version towards the end of the week.
Mankamana From: Mohamed Boucadair via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> Date: Wednesday, November 29, 2023 at 10:16 AM To: rtg-...@ietf.org <rtg-...@ietf.org> Cc: bess@ietf.org <bess@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop....@ietf.org <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop....@ietf.org> Subject: Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-06 Reviewer: Mohamed Boucadair Review result: Has Issues Hi Ali, Kesavan, Samir, Ashutosh, and Luay, Thanks for the effort put into this document. I'm impressed by your patience to carry this effort for +6 years. I do think that the overall document is in good track an its core contribution is almost stable. No serious warnings but a set of items that I think are worth clarifying (see the detailed review, fwiw). * pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-06-rev%20Med.pdf * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-06-rev%20Med.doc It would be helpful to include manageability aspects in one single section. I'm not convinced that Sections 8/9 fit in the core document. Likewise, the set of requirements are not linked to the rest of the document. I would expecting some "assessment" of how these are met in the design. Feel free to grab whatever you think useful in the review. Cheers, Med
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