> go on with your day smelling like the fruits of your micturation bath.
> P-R-O-B-L-E-M-S.

I also want to point out that "fruits of a bath" is a poorly mixed
metaphor.  Otherwise I thought it was a fine piece of prose.
Impassioned, heart-felt.

E

--
Erik Curiel
almost web-engineer/would-be philosopher

"Fig-tree, for such a long time now
I have found meaning in the way you almost
Completely omit your blossoms, and urge
Your pure mystery, unproclaimed,
Into your early ripening fruit."
                Rilke, "Duino Elegies"




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