Author: dnicholson
Date: 2006-04-20 17:56:22 -0600 (Thu, 20 Apr 2006)
New Revision: 5896
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml
Log:
Fixed typos and wordings in tin
Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml 2006-04-20 19:04:06 UTC (rev
5895)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml 2006-04-20 23:56:22 UTC (rev
5896)
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
<title>Introduction to TIN</title>
<para><application>TIN</application> is a threaded NNTP and spool based
- console console-mode UseNet newsreader. It supports threading, scoring,
+ console-mode UseNet newsreader. It supports threading, scoring,
different charsets, and many other useful things. It has also support for
different languages.</para>
@@ -114,12 +114,12 @@
and Asian languages support).</para>
<para><parameter>--enable-nntp-only</parameter>: Reading news from a local
- spool is disabled with this switch. Don't use this is you have installed
- INN and want to use its' spool.</para>
+ spool is disabled with this switch. Don't use this if you have installed
+ INN and want to use its spool.</para>
<para><parameter>--disable-printing</parameter>: This switch disables
- printing since <application>TIN</application> cant send non-ASCII text to
- the printer correctly. Remove this switch if you can tolerate this
+ printing since <application>TIN</application> cannot send non-ASCII text
+ to the printer correctly. Remove this switch if you can tolerate this
limitation.</para>
</sect2>
@@ -162,8 +162,8 @@
translit=ON
EOF</userinput></screen>
- <para>Now, as a normal user, subscribe to some newsgroups, specify the
- news server, and run <command>tin</command>:</para>
+ <para>Now, as an unprivileged user, subscribe to some newsgroups,
+ specify the news server, and run <command>tin</command>:</para>
<screen><userinput>cat >> ~/.newsrc << "EOF"
gmane.linux.lfs.devel:
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@
<segmentedlist>
<segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
<segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
- <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+ <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
<seg>tin, rtin, tinews.pl, metamutt, opt-case.pl, w2r.pl,
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