Author: randy
Date: 2006-04-21 06:04:30 -0600 (Fri, 21 Apr 2006)
New Revision: 5903

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/multimedia/audioutils/audacious.xml
Log:
Fixed some typos in the Audacious instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/multimedia/audioutils/audacious.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/multimedia/audioutils/audacious.xml      2006-04-21 11:38:21 UTC 
(rev 5902)
+++ trunk/BOOK/multimedia/audioutils/audacious.xml      2006-04-21 12:04:30 UTC 
(rev 5903)
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   %general-entities;
 
   <!ENTITY audacious-download-http 
"http://audacious-media-player.org/release/audacious-&audacious-version;.tgz";>
-  <!ENTITY audacious-download-ftp  " ">
+  <!ENTITY audacious-download-ftp  
"ftp://ftp.fu-berlin.de/unix/linux/mirrors/gentoo/distfiles/audacious-&audacious-version;.tgz";>
   <!ENTITY audacious-md5sum        "a3e0f49be74eecb3c27a5a901cff0b66">
   <!ENTITY audacious-size          "3.1 MB">
   <!ENTITY audacious-buildsize     "44.1 MB">
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="audacious.html"?>
 
   <sect1info>
-    <othername>$LastChangedBy: randy $</othername>
-    <date>$Date: 2006-04-10 19:44:25 +0100 (Mon, 10 Apr 2006) $</date>
+    <othername>$LastChangedBy$</othername>
+    <date>$Date$</date>
     <keywordset>
       <keyword role="package">audacious-&audacious-version;.tar</keyword>
       <keyword role="ftpdir">audacious</keyword>
@@ -27,13 +27,13 @@
   <title>Audacious-&audacious-version;</title>
 
   <indexterm zone="audacious">
-    <primary sortas="a-audacious">audacious</primary>
+    <primary sortas="a-Audacious">Audacious</primary>
   </indexterm>
 
   <sect2 role="package">
     <title>Introduction to Audacious</title>
 
-    <para><application>Audacious</application> is a Gtk-+2 audio player</para>
+    <para><application>Audacious</application> is a Gtk+-2 audio player.</para>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Package Information</bridgehead>
     <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
@@ -81,14 +81,16 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Audacious</title>
 
-    <para>The <application>Audacious</application> configure script will
+    <para>The <application>Audacious</application>
+    <command>configure</command> script will
     complain if it can't find <xref linkend="libvorbis"/>. If you have it
-    installed you can omit the <command>--disable-vorbis</command> 
option:</para>
+    installed, you can omit the <parameter>--disable-vorbis</parameter>
+    option:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --disable-vorbis &amp;&amp;
 make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Audacious does not come with a test suite.</para>
+    <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para>
 
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> 
user:</para>
 
@@ -121,8 +123,8 @@
       <varlistentry id="audacious-prog">
         <term><command>audacious</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a Gtk2 port of <application>xmms</application> based on the
-          <application>Beep Media Player</application></para>
+          <para>is a Gtk2 port of <application>XMMS</application> based on the
+          <application>Beep Media Player</application>.</para>
           <indexterm zone="audacious audacious-prog">
             <primary sortas="b-audacious">audacious</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -132,7 +134,8 @@
       <varlistentry id="libaudacious">
         <term><filename class='libraryfile'>libaudacious.so</filename></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>contains functions that are used by audacious to render its
+          <para>contains functions that are used by
+          <command>audacious</command> to render its
           graphical interface.</para>
           <indexterm zone="audacious libaudacious">
             <primary sortas="c-libaudacious">libaudacious.so</primary>


Property changes on: trunk/BOOK/multimedia/audioutils/audacious.xml
___________________________________________________________________
Name: svn:keywords
   + LastChangedBy Date

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