Author: randy
Date: 2006-04-25 23:00:36 -0600 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006)
New Revision: 5944

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
   trunk/BOOK/x/wm/xfce.xml
Log:
Fixed typos and tags in the XFce instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent      2006-04-26 03:51:34 UTC (rev 5943)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent      2006-04-26 05:00:36 UTC (rev 5944)
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@
 <!ENTITY sawfish-version              "1.3">
 <!ENTITY fluxbox-version              "0.9.15.1">
 <!ENTITY metacity-version             "2.12.2">
-<!ENTITY xfce-version                 "4.2.3">
+<!ENTITY xfce-version                 "4.2.3.2">
 
 <!-- Part VIII -->
 <!-- Chapter 28 & 29 -->

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/wm/xfce.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/wm/xfce.xml    2006-04-26 03:51:34 UTC (rev 5943)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/wm/xfce.xml    2006-04-26 05:00:36 UTC (rev 5944)
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@
   <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../../general.ent">
   %general-entities;
 
-  <!ENTITY xfce-download-http 
"http://prdownloads.sourceforge.net/xfce/xfce-4.2.3.2-src.tar.bz2";>
+  <!ENTITY xfce-download-http 
"http://prdownloads.sourceforge.net/xfce/xfce-&xfce-version;-src.tar.bz2";>
   <!ENTITY xfce-download-ftp  " ">
   <!ENTITY xfce-md5sum        "44e126e47657969657ff86fb558d54ea">
   <!ENTITY xfce-size          "25 MB">
-  <!ENTITY xfce-buildsize     "219 MB (to build and install everything without 
deleting the source)">
+  <!ENTITY xfce-buildsize     "219 MB (to build and install everything without 
deleting any sources)">
   <!ENTITY xfce-time          "3.5 SBU">
 ]>
 
@@ -65,11 +65,14 @@
     <xref linkend="libxml2"/></para>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
-    <para role="optional"><xref linkend="gdm"/>, <xref linkend="librsvg"/>,
+    <para role="optional"><xref linkend="gdm"/>,
+    <xref linkend="librsvg"/>
     (<application>xffm</application> links to 
<application>librsvg</application>
-    automatically if it is installed) <xref linkend="libgtkhtml"/>,
-    <xref linkend="startup-notification"/> and <xref linkend="a2ps"/> 
(required to build
-    <application>xfprint</application>).</para>
+    automatically if <application>librsvg</application> is installed),
+    <xref linkend="libgtkhtml"/>,
+    <xref linkend="startup-notification"/>, and
+    <xref linkend="a2ps"/>
+    (required to build <application>xfprint</application>).</para>
 
     <para condition="html" role="usernotes">User Notes:
     <ulink url="&blfs-wiki;/xfce"/></para>
@@ -79,8 +82,8 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of XFce</title>
 
-    <para>The following packages will install the bare
-    minimum:</para>
+    <para>A bare minimum <application>XFce</application> setup requires
+    installation of the following packages:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist spacing='compact'>
       <listitem>
@@ -126,14 +129,17 @@
 
     <para><application>xfce4-panel</application>, 
<application>xfdesktop</application>
     and <application>xfce-utils</application> require a parameter so that the
-    configuration files are installed in /etc/xdg. Configure them like 
this:</para>
+    configuration files are installed in
+    <filename class='directory'>/etc/xdg</filename>. Configure them by issuing 
the
+    following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --sysconfdir=/etc &amp;&amp;
 make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>If you use <xref linkend="gdm"/> as your display manager and would 
like to
-    be able to log into an xfce session from the login prompt, pass the
-    <parameter>--enable-gdm</parameter> option to the xfce-utils-&xfce-version;
+    <para>If you use <xref linkend="gdm"/> as your display manager and would
+    like to be able to log into an <application>XFce</application> session from
+    the login prompt, pass the <parameter>--enable-gdm</parameter> option to
+    the <application>xfce-utils</application>-&xfce-version;
     <command>configure</command> script (requires <xref linkend="which"/> to be
     installed at run time).</para>
 
@@ -188,28 +194,30 @@
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
-    <para>Almost all of these compile with these commands:</para>
+    <para>Configure all but the <application>xfce4-session</application> 
package
+    using the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &amp;&amp;
 make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Except for <application>xfce4-session</application> which needs to be
-    configured like this:</para>
+    <para><application>xfce4-session</application> requires the following
+    commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --sysconfdir=/etc \
      --libexecdir=/usr/lib/xfce4 &amp;&amp;
 make</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Also, <application>xfprint</application> can be configured with
-    <parameter>--enable-cups</parameter>, if you have <xref linkend="cups"/> 
installed.
-    </para>
+    <parameter>--enable-cups</parameter> if you have <xref linkend="cups"/>
+    installed.</para>
 
     <para>And then as <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>As <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>, move the help 
documentation
-    to the standard BLFS location and fix the help script to look for it 
there:</para>
+    <para>As the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, move the
+    help documentation to the standard BLFS location and modify the help 
script to
+    look for it there:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>mv -vf /usr/share/xfce4/doc 
/usr/share/doc/xfce4 &amp;&amp;
 sed -i '[EMAIL PROTECTED]/[EMAIL PROTECTED]/xfce4@' 
/usr/bin/xfhelp4</userinput></screen>

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