Author: dnicholson
Date: 2006-08-29 00:52:36 -0600 (Tue, 29 Aug 2006)
New Revision: 6287
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/general.ent
trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/vimrc.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/linux-pam.xml
Log:
Various text updates and link corrections reported on the lists.
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2006-08-15 15:39:10 UTC (rev 6286)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2006-08-29 06:52:36 UTC (rev 6287)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!ENTITY day "09"> <!-- Always 2 digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "29"> <!-- Always 2 digits -->
<!ENTITY month "08"> <!-- Always 2 digits -->
<!ENTITY year "2006">
<!ENTITY version "svn-&year;&month;&day;">
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml 2006-08-15 15:39:10 UTC
(rev 6286)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml 2006-08-29 06:52:36 UTC
(rev 6287)
@@ -42,6 +42,25 @@
-->
<listitem>
+ <para>August 29th, 2006</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[dnicholson] - Fixed the download link for the
+ Linux-PAM docs. Thanks to Tor Olav Slava.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[dnicholson] - Removed the reference to the vimrc
+ question in the FAQ since it no longer exists. Thanks to
+ Peter Ennis.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[dnicholson] - Minor text update on the bootdisk page.
+ Thanks to Peter Ennis.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
<para>August 9th, 2006</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml 2006-08-15 15:39:10 UTC (rev
6286)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml 2006-08-29 06:52:36 UTC (rev
6287)
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@
printed version of the Linux From Scratch book. If you download the ISO
image, use <xref linkend='cdrecord'/> to copy the image to a CD-ROM.</para>
- <para>A hint that describes the instructions for creating this ISO imate
- is available as a hint at <ulink
+ <para>A hint that describes the instructions for creating this ISO image
+ is available at <ulink
url='http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/hints/downloads/files/livecd.txt'/>.
</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/vimrc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/vimrc.xml 2006-08-15 15:39:10 UTC (rev 6286)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/vimrc.xml 2006-08-29 06:52:36 UTC (rev 6287)
@@ -59,8 +59,7 @@
" End .vimrc</literal></screen>
- <para>A FAQ on the LFS mailing lists regards the comment tags in
- <filename>vimrc</filename>. Note that they are " instead of the more
+ <para>Note that the comment tags are " instead of the more
usual # or //. This is correct, the syntax for
<filename>vimrc</filename> is slightly unusual.</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/linux-pam.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/linux-pam.xml 2006-08-15 15:39:10 UTC (rev
6286)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/linux-pam.xml 2006-08-29 06:52:36 UTC (rev
6287)
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<!ENTITY linux-pam-size "783 KB">
<!ENTITY linux-pam-buildsize "19.8 MB">
<!ENTITY linux-pam-time "0.5 SBU">
- <!ENTITY linux-pam-docs-download
"http://www.kernel.org/pub/linux/libs/pam/pre/library/Linux-PAM-&linux-pam-version;-docs.tar.bz2";>
+ <!ENTITY linux-pam-docs-download
"http://www.kernel.org/pub/linux/libs/pam/pre/doc/Linux-&linux-pam-version;-docs.tar.bz2";>
]>
<sect1 id="linux-pam" xreflabel="Linux-PAM-&linux-pam-version;">
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