Author: randy
Date: 2007-01-30 20:06:28 -0700 (Tue, 30 Jan 2007)
New Revision: 6494

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml
Log:
Alphabetized the 'Acknowledgement' page (along with some minor text changes)

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml 2007-01-31 02:48:04 UTC 
(rev 6493)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml 2007-01-31 03:06:28 UTC 
(rev 6494)
@@ -21,51 +21,58 @@
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
       <para>All those people listed on the Credits page for submitting patches,
-      instructions and corrections to the book.  The former editor would 
especially
-      like to thank Bruce, Larry and Billy for their enormous inputs to the 
project.</para>
+      instructions and corrections to the book.  The former editor would
+      especially like to thank Bruce, Larry and Billy for their enormous inputs
+      to the project.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para><ulink url="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Mark Stone</ulink>
-      &lt;mstone &lt;at&gt; linux.com&gt; for donating the &lfs-domainname;
-      servers.</para>
+      <para>Jeff Bauman (former co-editor of the book) for his assistance
+      with getting BLFS off the ground.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para><ulink url="mailto:gerard@&lfs-domainname;";>Gerard
-      Beekmans</ulink> &lt;gerard &lt;at&gt; &lfs-domainname;&gt; for starting 
and
-      writing the vast majority of the LFS project.</para>
+      <para><ulink url="mailto:gerard@&lfs-domainname;";>Gerard Beekmans</ulink>
+      &lt;gerard &lt;at&gt; &lfs-domainname;&gt; for starting and writing the
+      vast majority of the LFS project.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para><ulink url="mailto:highos@&lfs-domainname;";>Jesse
-      Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> &lt;higho &lt;at&gt; @&lfs-domainname;&gt; for 
answering
-      many questions on IRC, having a great deal of patience and for not 
killing
-      the former editor for the joke in the original BLFS announcement!</para>
+      <para>Robert Briggs for donating the &lfs-domainname; and
+      linuxfromscratch.com domain names.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para><ulink url="http://www.dreamwvr.com/services";>DREAMWVR.COM
-      </ulink> for their ongoing sponsorship by donating various resources to 
the
+      <para><ulink url="http://www.dreamwvr.com/services";>DREAMWVR.COM</ulink>
+      for their ongoing sponsorship by donating various resources to the
       LFS and related sub projects.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Robert Briggs for donating the &lfs-domainname; and
-      linuxfromscratch.com domain names.</para>
+      <para>Bruce Dubbs for donating the anduin package server and his
+      substantial contribution to the purchase of the new quantum 
server.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
+      <para><ulink url="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Garrett LeSage</ulink>
+      &lt;garrett &lt;at&gt; linux.com&gt; for creating the LFS banner.</para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
       <para><ulink url="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Frank Skettino</ulink>
-      &lt;bkenoah &lt;at&gt; oswd.org&gt; at <ulink  
url="http://www.oswd.org";>OSWD</ulink> for
-      coming up the initial design of the LFS and BLFS  websites.</para>
+      &lt;bkenoah &lt;at&gt; oswd.org&gt; at <ulink
+      url="http://www.oswd.org";>OSWD</ulink> for coming up with the initial
+      design of the LFS and BLFS websites.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para><ulink url="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Garrett LeSage</ulink>
-      &lt;garrett &lt;at&gt; linux.com&gt; for creating the LFS banner</para>
+      <para><ulink url="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Mark Stone</ulink>
+      &lt;mstone &lt;at&gt; linux.com&gt; for donating the original
+      &lfs-domainname; servers.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Jeff Bauman (former co-editor of the book) for his assistance
-      with getting BLFS off the ground.</para>
+      <para><ulink url="mailto:highos@&lfs-domainname;";>Jesse
+      Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> &lt;higho &lt;at&gt; @&lfs-domainname;&gt; for
+      answering many questions on IRC, having a great deal of patience and for
+      not killing the former editor for the joke in the original BLFS
+      announcement!</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Countless other people on the various LFS
-      and BLFS mailing lists who are making this book happen by
-      giving their suggestions, testing the book and submitting bug 
reports.</para>
+      <para>Countless other people on the various LFS and BLFS mailing lists
+      who are making this book possible by giving their suggestions, testing
+      the book and submitting bug reports.</para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 

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