Author: randy
Date: 2008-03-06 12:05:45 -0700 (Thu, 06 Mar 2008)
New Revision: 7204

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml
Log:
Fixed minor typos

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml  2008-03-06 18:24:53 UTC (rev 7203)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml  2008-03-06 19:05:45 UTC (rev 7204)
@@ -86,15 +86,16 @@
     <para role="recommended"><xref linkend="x-window-system"/></para>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
-    <para role="optional"><xref linkend="gtk2"/> OR
-    <xref linkend="lesstif"/> OR
+    <para role="optional"><xref linkend="gtk2"/> or
+    <xref linkend="lesstif"/> or
     <xref linkend="GTK"/>,
     <xref linkend="python"/>,
     <xref linkend="tcl"/>,
-    <xref linkend="ruby"/>,
-    <xref linkend="gpm"/> and
+    <xref linkend="ruby"/>, and
+    <xref linkend="gpm"/></para>
+    <!-- mentioned below as a runtime dependency
     <xref linkend="rsync"/> (to update the runtime files) 
-    </para>
+    -->
 
     <para condition="html" role="usernotes">User Notes:
     <ulink url="&blfs-wiki;/vim"/></para>
@@ -156,17 +157,14 @@
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>ln -snfv ../vim/vim71/doc 
/usr/share/doc/vim-&vim-version;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>If you wish to update the runtime files issue the
-    following command (requires <application>rsync</application>):</para>
+    <para>If you wish to update the runtime files, issue the
+    following command (requires <xref linkend="rsync"/>):</para>
       
-<screen><userinput>
-rsync -avzcP --delete --exclude="/dos/" --exclude="/spell/" 
ftp.nluug.nl::Vim/runtime/ ./runtime/
-</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>rsync -avzcP --delete --exclude="/dos/" --exclude="/spell/" 
ftp.nluug.nl::Vim/runtime/ ./runtime/</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> 
user:</para>
 
-<screen role="root"><userinput>make -C src installruntime
-</userinput></screen>
+<screen role="root"><userinput>make -C src installruntime</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml   2008-03-06 18:24:53 UTC (rev 7203)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml   2008-03-06 19:05:45 UTC (rev 7204)
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
       <para>This version of <application>ZSH</application> is a development
       release.  The BLFS staff has determined that it provides a stable
       program which works properly with multibyte locales (e.g., UTF-8).
-      To find the current stable release refer to the
+      To find the current stable release, refer to the
       <ulink url="http://www.zsh.org/";>ZSH home page</ulink> and compile
       <application>ZSH</application> with the same instructions.</para>
     </note>

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