[email protected] wrote: > Author: ken > Date: 2009-01-13 13:30:09 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jan 2009) > New Revision: 7726 > > Added: > trunk/BOOK/general/graphlib/jasper.xml
Some nitpicks follow. > + <!ENTITY jasper-download-ftp ""> You need a space between the "'s else PDF render will puke. > +]> What's this? > + <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Libjasper Dependencies</bridgehead> Please keep the titles consistent. So far everything was just "Jasper" > + <title>Installation of jasper</title> Capitalization (JasPer) > + > +<note> > + <para>The package source is distributed in <filename>zip</filename> Would be better as <filename class="extension">.zip</filename> > + <para>If you wish to install the pdf files for the Reference Manual and a > + tutorial on the JPEG-2000 standard, run the following commands:</para> pdf should be all caps as PDF. Additionally, it has been customary to include something similar to "as the <systemitem...>root</sys...> user. > + <para><option>--x-includes=DIR --x-libraries=DIR</option>: These tell > the configure > + script where to find xorg if it is not in configure should be <command>configure</command> and xorg should be Xorg. (Even better is <application>Xorg</application>, though it currently isn't used in our stylesheets.) > + <title>Configuring jasper</title> Caps again on the title. > + > + <sect3> > + <title>Configuration Information</title> > + > + <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"; > + href="../../xincludes/lib-config.xml"/> What is this? If it is the 'you need to do the ldconfig' thing, then let's ditch this. I think we should ditch all of them in the book. If you ditch it, comment out the whole "Configuration" section. -- Randy -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/blfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
