[email protected] wrote:
> Author: gdalziel
> Date: 2009-07-23 09:53:56 -0600 (Thu, 23 Jul 2009)
> New Revision: 7861
> 
> Added:
>    trunk/BOOK/pst/ps/epdfview.xml
> +    <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
> +    <para role="required"><xref linkend="poppler"/>, and <xref 
> linkend="gtk2"/></para>

Whenever there is a list of just two items, a comma is not necessary.


> +    <segmentedlist>
> +      <segtitle>Installed Program(s)</segtitle>
> +      <segtitle>Installed Librar(y,ies)</segtitle>
> +      <segtitle>Installed Director(y,ies)</segtitle>

Since there is only one program installed, change the above to Program.
Since there are no libs installed, change the above to Libraries.
Since there is only one dir installed, change the above to Directory.

If you want, you can add yourself to the credits page for adding this
package. It should be self-explanatory on how to do it.

-- 
Randy

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