[email protected] wrote these words on 07/27/09 09:06 CST: > Author: randy > Fixed some typos in the rarian package > > - <!ENTITY rarian-download-http > "http://ftp.gnome.org/pub/gnome/sources/rarian/0.8/rarian-0.8.1.tar.bz2";> > - <!ENTITY rarian-download-ftp > "ftp://ftp.gnome.org/pub/gnome/sources/rarian/0.8/rarian-0.8.1.tar.bz2";> > + <!ENTITY rarian-download-http > "&gnome-download-http;/rarian/0.8/rarian-0.8.1.tar.bz2"> > + <!ENTITY rarian-download-ftp > "&gnome-download-ftp;/rarian/0.8/rarian-0.8.1.tar.bz2">
Notice the use of entities for the gnome download locations. If for whatever reason, GNOME moves to a different directory structure, we only need to change the entity. > - <!ENTITY rarian-buildsize "6 MB"> > + <!ENTITY rarian-buildsize "6.0 MB"> I'm not sure why I did this. I think just the plain 6 MB is probably best. > - <para role="recommended"><xref linkend="libxslt"/> (rarian-sk-extract > will not be built without this)</para> > + <para role="recommended"><xref linkend="libxslt"/> > + (rarian-sk-extract will not be built without this)</para> Try to keep XML lines of code to 80 chars or less has been the convention. > <varlistentry id="rarian-example"> > <term><command>rarian-example</command></term> > <listitem> > - <para>Prints a nice list of all available documents found by the > + <para>prints a nice list of all available documents found by the > library.</para> What we try to do here is sort of make a sentence. The command is followed by a description to complete the sentence. Opposite of what LFS does. -- Randy rmlscsi: [bogomips 1003.25] [GNU ld version 2.16.1] [gcc (GCC) 4.0.3] [GNU C Library stable release version 2.3.6] [Linux 2.6.14.3 i686] 09:11:03 up 20 days, 21:39, 1 user, load average: 1.21, 0.72, 0.62 -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/blfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
