[email protected] wrote: > Author: wblaszcz > Date: 2009-07-29 07:47:52 -0600 (Wed, 29 Jul 2009) > New Revision: 7901 > > <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead> > - <para role="required"><xref linkend="glib2"/> and > + <para role="required"><xref linkend="glib2"/>, and > <xref linkend="libxml2"/></para>
The use of a comma in a list of two items is discouraged. The "and" is adequate. > > + <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Recommended</bridgehead> > + <para role="recommended"><xref linkend="libproxy"/>, and > + <xref linkend="sqlite"/></para> I think we are overusing the Recommended dependencies. Why are these recommended. I think we should identify why they are recommended (parenthetical after the list would suffice). Also, ditto the use of a comma. -- Randy -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/blfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
