Author: pierre
Date: Wed Aug  2 06:13:02 2017
New Revision: 18980

Log:
Pedantry in upower

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/upower.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/upower.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/upower.xml      Wed Aug  2 05:27:06 2017        
(r18979)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/upower.xml      Wed Aug  2 06:13:02 2017        
(r18980)
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@
       <title>Systemd Unit</title>
 
       <para>
-        To start the <command>upowerd</command> daemon at boot,
+        To start the <command>UPower</command> service at boot,
         enable the previously installed systemd unit by
         running the following command as the
         <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:
@@ -183,16 +183,18 @@
     <title>Contents</title>
 
     <segmentedlist>
-      <segtitle>Installed Program<phrase 
revision="systemd">s</phrase></segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Program<!--
+See below... <phrase revision="systemd">s</phrase>--></segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>
-          upower<phrase revision="systemd"> and upowerd</phrase>
-<!-- Not sure upowerd should be listed. Isn't it in /usr/libexec for systemd
-too? Normally, we do not list executables, which are not supposed to be run
-by a user -->
+          upower
+<!-- <phrase revision="systemd"> and upowerd</phrase>
+Upowerd should not be listed, as it is in /usr/libexec, and is not supposed
+to be run by a user. Furthermore, upowerd is also in sysv, and there is no
+reason so single out systemd here. -->
         </seg>
         <seg>
           libupower-glib.so
@@ -221,7 +223,7 @@
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
-
+<!-- See above
       <varlistentry id="upowerd" revision="systemd">
         <term><command>upowerd</command></term>
         <listitem>
@@ -233,7 +235,7 @@
             <primary sortas="b-upowerd">upowerd</primary>
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
+      </varlistentry>-->
 
       <varlistentry id="libupower-glib">
         <term><filename class="libraryfile">libupower-glib.so</filename></term>
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