Author: pierre
Date: Thu Sep 14 10:40:23 2017
New Revision: 19219

Log:
Nitpick, when a link needs an explanation in parentheses, do not put that
explanation in the linl text

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml
   trunk/BOOK/kde/plasma5/plasma-all.xml
   trunk/BOOK/networking/netlibs/curl.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnumeric.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml  Thu Sep 14 08:50:26 2017        
(r19218)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml  Thu Sep 14 10:40:23 2017        
(r19219)
@@ -91,8 +91,8 @@
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
     <para role="optional">
-      <ulink url="http://oss.oetiker.ch/rrdtool/";>RRDtool (required to build 
the
-      <command>sensord</command> program)</ulink>
+      <ulink url="http://oss.oetiker.ch/rrdtool/";>RRDtool</ulink> (required to
+      build the <command>sensord</command> program)
     </para>
 
     <para condition="html" role="usernotes">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/kde/plasma5/plasma-all.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/plasma5/plasma-all.xml       Thu Sep 14 08:50:26 2017        
(r19218)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/plasma5/plasma-all.xml       Thu Sep 14 10:40:23 2017        
(r19219)
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
     <ulink url="http://qalculate.sourceforge.net";>Qalculate</ulink>,
     <ulink url="https://launchpad.net/qapt";>Qapt</ulink>, 
     <ulink url="https://github.com/osiam/osiam";>SCIM</ulink>, and
-    <ulink url="http://www.dest-unreach.org/socat/";>socat (for 
pam_kwallet)</ulink>
+    <ulink url="http://www.dest-unreach.org/socat/";>socat</ulink> (for 
pam_kwallet)
   </para>
 
   <para condition="html" role="usernotes">User Notes:

Modified: trunk/BOOK/networking/netlibs/curl.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/networking/netlibs/curl.xml      Thu Sep 14 08:50:26 2017        
(r19218)
+++ trunk/BOOK/networking/netlibs/curl.xml      Thu Sep 14 10:40:23 2017        
(r19219)
@@ -106,10 +106,9 @@
       <ulink url="https://github.com/rockdaboot/libpsl";>libpsl</ulink>,
       <ulink url="http://rtmpdump.mplayerhq.hu/";>librtmp</ulink>,
       <ulink url="http://www.libssh2.org";>libssh2</ulink>,
-      <ulink url="https://tls.mbed.org/";>mbed TLS (formerly known as
-      PolarSSL)</ulink>, and
-      <ulink url="http://spnego.sourceforge.net/";>
-      SPNEGO</ulink>
+      <ulink url="https://tls.mbed.org/";>mbed TLS</ulink> (formerly known as
+      PolarSSL), and
+      <ulink url="http://spnego.sourceforge.net/";> SPNEGO</ulink>
     </para>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional for Running the Test 
Suite</bridgehead>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnumeric.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnumeric.xml        Thu Sep 14 08:50:26 2017        
(r19218)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnumeric.xml        Thu Sep 14 10:40:23 2017        
(r19219)
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
       <xref linkend="pygobject3"/>,
       <xref linkend="valgrind"/> (for some tests),
 <!--  <xref linkend="guile"/>, Developer: support unmaintained-->
-      <ulink url="http://dblatex.sourceforge.net/";>dblatex (for PDF 
docs)</ulink>,
+      <ulink url="http://dblatex.sourceforge.net/";>dblatex</ulink> (for PDF 
docs),
       <ulink url="http://www.gnome-db.org/";>libgda</ulink>,
       <ulink url="http://www.mono-project.com/";>Mono</ulink>,
       <ulink url="http://pxlib.sourceforge.net/";>pxlib</ulink>, and
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