Author: pierre
Date: Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
New Revision: 19660
Log:
Fix various typos/wordings
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/js38.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/prog/perl-modules.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/prog/python3.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/acpid.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml
trunk/BOOK/networking/netlibs/curl.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/devices.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/firmware.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/lvm2.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/mdadm.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/parted.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/polkit.xml
trunk/BOOK/server/mail/exim.xml
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/js38.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/js38.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018 (r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/js38.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018 (r19660)
@@ -160,13 +160,13 @@
<title>Command Explanations</title>
<para>
- <command>autoconf213</command>: This command regenerates the configure
+ <command>autoconf2.13</command>: This command regenerates the configure
script with the changes from the patch.
</para>
<para>
<parameter>--with-*</parameter>: These parameters allow the build system
- to use system versions of the above libriares. These are required for
+ to use system versions of the above libraries. These are required for
stability.
</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/perl-modules.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/perl-modules.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/perl-modules.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -897,7 +897,7 @@
</listitem>
<!-- Params-Validate -->
<listitem><literallayout><ulink
url="http://search.cpan.org/dist/Params-Validate/";>Params::Validate</ulink>
-(http::/search.cpan.org/dist/Params-Validate/) - uses <xref
linkend="perl-build-install"/></literallayout>
+(http://search.cpan.org/dist/Params-Validate/) - uses <xref
linkend="perl-build-install"/></literallayout>
<!-- deps for Params::Validate:
Module::Build is a dep of Module::Implementation via Module::Runtime,
pulled in by Package::Stash in namespace::clean for
@@ -1756,7 +1756,7 @@
<para>The SGMLSpm module is a <application>Perl</application> library
used for parsing the output from James Clark's SGMLS and NSGMLS
- parsers. This modules uses the standard
+ parsers. This module uses the standard
<xref linkend="perl-standard-install"/>.</para>
&lfs81_checked;
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/python3.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/python3.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018 (r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/python3.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018 (r19660)
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@
<para>
The test suite must be run separately from the build, either before or
after the package is built and installed. Do not run
- <command>make install</command>, after running the test suite. To build
+ <command>make install</command> after running the test suite. To build
and install the package, you need to start with a fresh or clean source
tree. For the test, you also need a clean source code, so either start by
removing the source code directory and starting over, by uncompressing
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/acpid.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/acpid.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/acpid.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -139,8 +139,10 @@
<para>
Unfortunately, not every computer labels ACPI events in the same way. To
determine how your buttons are recognized, use the
- <command>acpi_listen</command> tool. Also, look in package
documentation's
- samples directory for more examples.
+ <command>acpi_listen</command> tool. Also, look in the <filename
+ class="directory">samples</filename> directory under <filename
+ class="directory">/usr/share/doc/acpid-&acpid-version;</filename>
+ for more examples.
</para>
<sect3 id="acpid-init">
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -31,7 +31,8 @@
<para>
The <application>Hdparm</application> package contains a utility that
- is useful for controlling ATA/IDE controllers and hard drives both to
+ is useful for obtaining information about, and controlling ATA/IDE
+ controllers and hard drives. It allows to
increase performance and sometimes to increase stability.
</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@
<title>Introduction to Power Management Utilities</title>
<para>
- The <application>Power Management Utilities</application> is a small
- collection of scripts to suspend and hibernate a computer that can be
used
- to run user supplied scripts on suspend and resume.
+ The <application>Power Management Utilities</application> provide
+ simple shell command line tools to suspend and hibernate the computer.
+ They can be used to run user supplied scripts on suspend and resume.
</para>
&lfs81_checked;
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
<para>
In order to use hibernation with <application>GRUB</application> and a
swap partition, you need to add kernel parameter
- <literal>resume=<replaceable>swap_partition</replaceable></literal> (i.e.
+ <literal>resume=<replaceable>swap_partition</replaceable></literal> (e.g.
<literal>resume=/dev/sda1</literal>) to the kernel line in the
<filename>/boot/grub/grub.cfg</filename> configuration file.
</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/networking/netlibs/curl.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/networking/netlibs/curl.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/networking/netlibs/curl.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -163,9 +163,9 @@
/lib/ld-2.23.so (or later) library with debugging symbols present.
</para>
- <para>Current versions of LFS does not strip /lib/ld-2.23.so but
+ <para>Current versions of LFS do not strip /lib/ld-2.23.so but
previous versions of LFS stripped these debugging symbols at the end of
- Chapter 6. To get this library on oldeer systems, glibc must be rebuilt
+ Chapter 6. To get this library on older systems, glibc must be rebuilt
with the current
glibc version using the same compiler that was used to build LFS. The
ld-2.23.so can then be renamed to ld-2.23.so.dbg and copied to /lib. Then
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/devices.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/devices.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/devices.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@
<sect2 id="dev-dvd">
<title>Devices for DVD Drives</title>
- <para>If the initial boot process doe not set up the
+ <para>If the initial boot process does not set up the
<systemitem>/dev/dvd</systemitem> device properly, it can
be installed using the following modification to the default udev rules.
As the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, run:</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/firmware.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/firmware.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/firmware.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
<MYCONTAINER> with the name of the container for your CPU's
family):</para>
-<screen><userinput>cp -v /lib/firmware/amd_ucode/<MYCONTAINER>
kernel/x86/microcode/AuthenticAMD.bin</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>cp -v /lib/firmware/amd-ucode/<MYCONTAINER>
kernel/x86/microcode/AuthenticAMD.bin</userinput></screen>
<para>Or for an Intel machine copy the appropriate blob using this
command:</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/lvm2.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/lvm2.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/lvm2.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@
-->
<para>
- Those tests do not implement the <quote>expected fail</quote>
possibility,
+ The tests do not implement the <quote>expected fail</quote> possibility,
and a small number of test failures is expected by upstream. More
failures may happen because some kernel options are missing. For example,
the lack of the <emphasis>dm-delay</emphasis> device mapper target may
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/mdadm.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/mdadm.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/mdadm.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- <parameter>--logdir=test-logs</parameter>: Defines that the directory
+ <parameter>--logdir=test-logs</parameter>: Defines the directory
where test logs are saved.
</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/parted.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/parted.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/parted.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
dvips -o doc/parted.ps doc/parted.dvi</userinput></screen>
<para>If you wish to run the test suite, first remove a test that normally
- fails in BLFS, because it needs a locale C.UTF-8:</para>
+ fails in BLFS (because it needs a locale C.UTF-8):</para>
<screen><userinput>sed -i '/t0251-gpt-unicode.sh/d'
tests/Makefile</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/polkit.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/polkit.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018
(r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/polkit.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018
(r19660)
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
&lfs81_checked;
- <note><para>Due to lack of relases, a tarball has been generated for use by
+ <note><para>Due to lack of releases, a tarball has been generated for use
by
BLFS, which includes a git checkout at ref 2919920, and a pending patch to
use js38. The patch is included in the tarball for review.</para></note>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/mail/exim.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/mail/exim.xml Wed Jan 10 01:16:54 2018 (r19659)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/mail/exim.xml Wed Jan 10 02:44:47 2018 (r19660)
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@
Review the file <filename>/etc/exim.conf</filename>, and modify any
settings to suit your needs. Note that the default configuration
assumes that the <filename class="directory">/var/mail</filename>
- directory is world writable, but has the stiky bit set. If you want
+ directory is world writable, but has the sticky bit set. If you want
to use the default configuration, issue as the <systemitem
class="username">root</systemitem> user:
</para>
--
http://lists.linuxfromscratch.org/listinfo/blfs-book
FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html
Unsubscribe: See the above information page
