Author: bdubbs
Date: Sun Sep 23 10:33:20 2018
New Revision: 20528
Log:
Numerous typos and text corrections
Modified:
branches/basic/general/sysutils/fcron.xml
branches/basic/introduction/important/building-notes.xml
branches/basic/introduction/important/starting.xml
branches/basic/introduction/welcome/conventions.xml
branches/basic/postlfs/config/console-fonts.xml
branches/basic/postlfs/config/devices.xml
branches/basic/postlfs/config/firmware.xml
branches/basic/postlfs/security/openssh.xml
branches/basic/postlfs/security/sudo.xml
Modified: branches/basic/general/sysutils/fcron.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/general/sysutils/fcron.xml Sun Sep 23 10:22:50 2018
(r20527)
+++ branches/basic/general/sysutils/fcron.xml Sun Sep 23 10:33:20 2018
(r20528)
@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@
A mail server such as <xref linkend="postfix"/>,
A text editor
(default is <command>vi</command> from the vim package),
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/postlfs/linux-pam.html">linux-pam</ulink>, and
- <ulink
url="&blfs-book;/postlfs/pst/docbook-utils.html">docbook-utils</ulink>
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;postlfs/linux-pam.html">linux-pam</ulink>, and
+ <ulink
url="&blfs-book;postlfs/pst/docbook-utils.html">docbook-utils</ulink>
</para>
<para condition="html" role="usernotes">User Notes:
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
<para>
<option>--with-dsssl-dir=<replaceable></path/to/dsssl-stylesheets></replaceable></option>:
May be used if you have
- <ulink
url="&blfs-book;/postlfs/pst/docbook-utils.html">docbook-utils</ulink>
+ <ulink
url="&blfs-book;postlfs/pst/docbook-utils.html">docbook-utils</ulink>
installed.
Currently, the dsssl stylesheets are located at
<filename
class="directory">/usr/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl-stylesheets-1.79</filename>.
Modified: branches/basic/introduction/important/building-notes.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/introduction/important/building-notes.xml Sun Sep 23
10:22:50 2018 (r20527)
+++ branches/basic/introduction/important/building-notes.xml Sun Sep 23
10:33:20 2018 (r20528)
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@
executable needs File A and File B, attempting to link the program before
one of the dependent components is available will result in a failure.
This condition usually arises because the upstream developer has not
- properly designated all the prerequsites needed to accomplish a step in the
+ properly designated all the prerequisites needed to accomplish a step in
the
Makefile.</para>
<para>If this occurs, the best way to proceed is to drop back to a
@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
-
+<!--
<sect2 id="libtool">
<title>Libtool files</title>
@@ -450,5 +450,5 @@
</para>
</sect2>
-
+-->
</sect1>
Modified: branches/basic/introduction/important/starting.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/introduction/important/starting.xml Sun Sep 23 10:22:50
2018 (r20527)
+++ branches/basic/introduction/important/starting.xml Sun Sep 23 10:33:20
2018 (r20528)
@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@
</para>
<para>
- A sever is the simplier category. Generally this consistes of a web
+ A server is the simpler category. Generally this consists of a web
server such as the
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/server/apache.html">Apache HTTP Server</ulink>
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;server/apache.html">Apache HTTP Server</ulink>
and a database server such as
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/server/mariadb.html">MariaDB</ulink>.
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;server/mariadb.html">MariaDB</ulink>.
However other services are possible. The operating system
embedded in a single use device falls into this category.
</para>
@@ -40,17 +40,17 @@
<para>
On the other hand, a workstation is much more complex. It generally
requires a graphical user environment such as
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/lxde/lxde.html">LXDE</ulink>,
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/xfce/xfce.html">XFCE</ulink>,
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/kde/kde.html">KDE</ulink>, or
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/gnome/gnome.html">Gnome</ulink>
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;lxde/lxde.html">LXDE</ulink>,
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;xfce/xfce.html">XFCE</ulink>,
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;kde/kde.html">KDE</ulink>, or
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;gnome/gnome.html">Gnome</ulink>
(systemd versions of LFS only) based on the
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/x/installing.html">X Window graphical
environment</ulink>
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;x/installing.html">X Window graphical
environment</ulink>
and several graphical based applications such as the
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/xsoft/firefox.html">Firefox web
browser</ulink>,
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/xsoft/thunderbird.html">Thunderbird email
client</ulink>,
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;xsoft/firefox.html">Firefox web
browser</ulink>,
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;xsoft/thunderbird.html">Thunderbird email
client</ulink>,
or
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/xsoft/libreoffice.html">LibreOffice office
suite</ulink>.
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;xsoft/libreoffice.html">LibreOffice office
suite</ulink>.
These applications require many (several hundred depending on
desired capabilities) more packages of support applications and
libraries.
@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@
EOF</command></screen>
<para>
- Note that the last three commands inthe script are commented out. These
- are useful if those directories are mounted as separate partitons on the
+ Note that the last three commands in the script are commented out. These
+ are useful if those directories are mounted as separate partitions on
the
host system and will be mounted when booting the completed LFS/BLFS
system.
</para>
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Another issue pointed out by the scriptis where to store downloaded
+ Another issue pointed out by the script is where to store downloaded
package files. This location is arbitrary. It can be in a regular
user's home directory such as ~/sources or in a global location like
/usr/src. Our recommendation is not to mix BLFS sources and LFS sources
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- A last convenince feature presented here is to streamline the process
+ A last convenience feature presented here is to streamline the process
of entering the chroot environment. This can be done with an alias
placed in a user's ~/.bashrc file on the host system:
</para>
Modified: branches/basic/introduction/welcome/conventions.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/introduction/welcome/conventions.xml Sun Sep 23 10:22:50
2018 (r20527)
+++ branches/basic/introduction/welcome/conventions.xml Sun Sep 23 10:33:20
2018 (r20528)
@@ -96,12 +96,12 @@
<para>When packages are created, the authors depend on prior work. In
order to build a package in BLFS, these dependencies must be built prior to
- the desired package. For each package, any prerequsite packages are listed
+ the desired package. For each package, any prerequisite packages are
listed
in one or more separate sections: Required, Recommended, and
Optional.</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect3">Required Dependencies</bridgehead>
- <para>These dependencies are the minimum prerequsite packages required to
+ <para>These dependencies are the minimum prerequisite packages required to
build the package. Omitted from the list are packages in LFS and required
dependencies of other required packages.</para>
Modified: branches/basic/postlfs/config/console-fonts.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/postlfs/config/console-fonts.xml Sun Sep 23 10:22:50
2018 (r20527)
+++ branches/basic/postlfs/config/console-fonts.xml Sun Sep 23 10:33:20
2018 (r20528)
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- When you find a font which to wish to use, as the
+ When you find a font which you wish to use, as the
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user) edit
the appropriate configururation file.
@@ -231,7 +231,10 @@
<para>
By default <application>terminus-fonts</application> will try to create
several types of font, and it will fail if <command>bdftopcf</command>
- from <!--<xref linkend="xorg7-app"/>--> has not been installed. The
configure
+ from the
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;x/x7app.html">Xorg Applications</ulink>,
+ section of BLFS
+ has not been installed. The configure
script is only really useful if you go on to install
<emphasis>all</emphasis> the fonts (console and X11 bitmap) to the
correct directories, as in a distro. To build only the PSF fonts and
Modified: branches/basic/postlfs/config/devices.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/postlfs/config/devices.xml Sun Sep 23 10:22:50 2018
(r20527)
+++ branches/basic/postlfs/config/devices.xml Sun Sep 23 10:33:20 2018
(r20528)
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
<note><para>The above line is used for descriptive purposes only. The
scanner <application>udev</application> rules are put into place when
<!-- installing <xref linkend='sane'/>.</para></note>-->
- installing <ulink
url='&blfs-book;/pst/sane.html'>sane</ulink>.</para></note>
+ installing <ulink
url='&blfs-book;pst/sane.html'>sane</ulink>.</para></note>
</sect2>
Modified: branches/basic/postlfs/config/firmware.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/postlfs/config/firmware.xml Sun Sep 23 10:22:50 2018
(r20527)
+++ branches/basic/postlfs/config/firmware.xml Sun Sep 23 10:33:20 2018
(r20528)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
<xref linkend="pciutils"/>,
<xref linkend="wget"/>, and
<!-- <xref linkend="git"/>, -->
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/general/git.html">git</ulink>
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;general/git.html">git</ulink>
</para></note>
<para condition="html" role="usernotes">User Notes:
Modified: branches/basic/postlfs/security/openssh.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/postlfs/security/openssh.xml Sun Sep 23 10:22:50 2018
(r20527)
+++ branches/basic/postlfs/security/openssh.xml Sun Sep 23 10:33:20 2018
(r20528)
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
<para role="optional">
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/postlfs/linux-pam.html">linux-pam</ulink>,
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;postlfs/linux-pam.html">linux-pam</ulink>,
<ulink url="&blfs-book;x/installing.html">x-window-system</ulink>,
<ulink url="&blfs-book;postlfs/mitkrb.html">MIT Kerberos</ulink>,
<ulink url="http://www.thrysoee.dk/editline/";>libedit</ulink>,
Modified: branches/basic/postlfs/security/sudo.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/basic/postlfs/security/sudo.xml Sun Sep 23 10:22:50 2018
(r20527)
+++ branches/basic/postlfs/security/sudo.xml Sun Sep 23 10:33:20 2018
(r20528)
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
<para role="optional">
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;/postlfs/linux-pam.html">linux-pam</ulink>,
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;postlfs/linux-pam.html">linux-pam</ulink>,
<ulink url="&blfs-book;postlfs/mitkrb.html">MIT Kerberos</ulink>,
<ulink url="&blfs-book;postlfs/openldap.html">openldap</ulink>
<xref linkend="postfix"/> (or an equivalent package that provides a
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