On Thu, Aug 02, at 03:57 Randy McMurchy wrote: > > + <para>The <application>rxvt-unicode</application> application, can > > also run in > > + a daemon mode, which make possible to open multiple terminal windows > > within the > > + same process. The <command>urxvtc</command> client connects then to > > + <command>urxvtd</command> daemon and requests a new terminal > > window.</para> > > Remove the first comma in the first sentence. Then: > > s/which make/which makes it/ > > Additionally, you can probably remove the whole last sentence as > that information is implied in the previous sentence about the > daemon. Your call.
I would prefer to leave it there, as it is important for the reader to understand how the daemon system works. > > > + <note> > > + <para>Use that option with caution. If the daemon crashes, all the > > + running processes in the terminal windows are terminated.</para> > > + </note> > > I am getting to where I use fewer and fewer of the note/warning/caution > boxes. They do draw attention, however, the readers shouldn't need a gaudy > box so that they will read something. Again, your call. > Ah, this is critical information. I read it in my first patch (with the emphasis tags), and I wasn't satisfied. It looks better to me with the note tags. I would prefer to leave it that way if you don't mind. > > > + <para> > > + You can start the <command>urxvtd</command> daemon in your system or > > How do you know the reader will be working on his own system? :-) > > s/your/the/ This catch deserves a smile. :-) > > BTW, ag, this is very good work! > And you are my hero, I applied all your fixes. Many many thanks, Oh, the power of the community! I hope it to stay that way. Actually it seems like a good idea now that I am thinking about it. To do the preliminary work in -dev, and then to commit it. I think I will follow that way, if you -all- don't mind. :) -- http://wiki.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/wiki/Hacking -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/blfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
