I've attached a patch with some updates to the Acknowledgments and Credits pages, taking into account the changed chapter #'s for KDE and GNOME instructions and one more lingering mention of GNOME 1.4

Also, I was about to submit a bunch of corrections for "acknowledgments" listed for packages no longer in the book, including the /etc/inputrc and Package Management sections which have been moved into LFS, but I wasn't sure how those are handled. Some packages are just no longer mentioned on that page, some are still there despite not appearing in the book, and some are simply commented out. What should be done here?
Index: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml (working copy)
@@ -140,12 +140,12 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Chapters 28 and 29: KDE:
+        <para>Chapters 28, 29, and 30: KDE:
         <emphasis>Bruce Dubbs</emphasis>.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Chapters 30, 31, and 32: GNOME:
+        <para>Chapters 31 and 32: GNOME:
         <emphasis>Larry Lawrence</emphasis>.</para>
       </listitem>
 
Index: trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml    (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml    (working copy)
@@ -66,8 +66,7 @@
 
   <para><application>GNOME</application> is the main alternative to
   <application>KDE</application> in the Desktop Environment arena and
-  we cover both <application>GNOME</application>-1.4
-  and <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
+  we cover <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
 
   <bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part X - X Software</bridgehead>
 
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