Hi, a few comments on the following draft:
http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-bliss-call-park-extension-01.txt Abstract: "An additional URI parameter is also described". Replace described with specified or defined. Actually, Informational RFCs cannot define SIP URI parameters. As stated in Section 7.1 of draft-peterson-rai-rfc3427bis, a standards track RFC is needed. Section 2: s/section 2.15/Section 2.15/ and perform a similar change throughout the document. I guess Section 6 has been included in the document as a historical reference. Can we move that information to an appendix? Cheers, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ BLISS mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bliss
