In a message dated 8/18/03 5:49:12 PM US Mountain Standard Time, [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:
<< --- [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > Added characters, hopefully better logic, and now > with a date and made up location. <story snipped> Much better logical flow, and as for the ending -- how illustrative of those who seek to follow the Path of Redemption. :) For The Good Of The Whole Maru >> I think I may want to add a bit of detail about the qheuen having diamonds for teeth, and the Ur I think lisp only on "B". Without overbogging the story, I may want to make it a bit more readable for the new to Uplift reader. Glad you read both, and can see the difference between a one day job and a bit of reflection. ------- I now have to do a webpage indroduction and explination to everything I want to do, and then our good Dr. will make a link to it. But Steve, I think he wants a comment page for each story. This is now sounding like work. We'll talk in zMUD. Walking wounded William ---------------------------------- I pulled a back muscle, Debbi _______________________________________________ http://www.mccmedia.com/mailman/listinfo/brin-l
