Hi Peter,
  Brilliant, This is more than what I'd hoped for. Much appreciated :)


Lyle


Peter Haworth wrote:
>
>
> On Thu, 30 Apr 2009 03:20:04 +0100, Lyle wrote:
> > I was hoping I could get a little feedback on the content before it
> > the first one goes out (later today)
>
> This might not be early enough, but here's my take:
>
>
> > Software Programming
> >
> > A local programming group is offering schools and colleges, a free
> > evening software programming course for their students. Details of
> > which follow:-
>
> A free evening course for beginners in software programming is being
> offered to local school and college students.
>
> ["Details ..." is superfluous]
>
>
> > What is Perl?
> >
> > Perl is a programming language. There are lots of different
> > programming languages, some suited to making specific pieces of
> > software, others can be applied to a broad range of applications. A
> > programming language is designed to be human readable and writeable,
> > it gets translated into the ones and naughts of machine code by a
> > compiler. Perl is what's known as a high level language, meaning
> > it's far away from coding in ones and naughts.
>
>
> There are many different programming languages; some specially
> designed writing for specific types of software, while others, like
> Perl, can be applied to a broad range of software. High level
> programming languages, such as Perl, are designed so that programs may
> be easily read and written by humans. Such programs are then
> translated by a compiler into the ones and zeroes which are understood
> by computers.
>
> ["naught" is nothing, "nought" is zero, and "zero" sounds
> better anyway]
>
> > Why is Perl a good first language?
>
> [It isn't, as Larry said: "Perl should only be studied as a second
> language. A good first language would be English."]
>
> Why is Perl a good first programming language?
>
>
> > Although many people find Perl is the only programming language
> > they need.
>
> However, many people ...
>
> > The webs most popular film and movie site is powered by Perl
> > http://www.imdb.com/
>
> The web's ...
>
> > Jobs as programmers
> >
> > Programming isn't easy, it requires a lot of practice and skill.
>
> s/,/;/
>
> > Employers seeking software developers most often test a programmers
>
> "test a programmer's" or "test programmers'". "most" is superfluous.
>
>
> > What does the course provide?
> >
> > The course teaches the basics of computer programming. How to create
> > small programs in Perl that read input from the user and save things
> > to disk.
>
> ... save output to disk or display it to the user.
>
> [You probably also need to mention something else, as that's not very
> inspiring on its own. Do you include any web stuff? Are any of the
> programs interesting in their own right, such as simple games
> (hangman, the animal guessing game)?]
>
>
> > Most importantly, the course aims to show students how they can
> > teach themselves further programming skills.
>
> [well worth mentioning]
>
>
> > Why is this course offered for free?
> >
> > Perl itself is open source and free to download. It's not a
> > commercial product like Microsoft Windows. The local Perl moungers
> > group wants to
>
> [Either "mongers" or "mungers", please; I don't like "m[ou]ngers"
> much at the best of times, but I really hate the idea of coining
> "moungers" from it]
>
>
> > promote Perl as a programming language and bring new blood to the
>
> useful language [you can't deny that it's a programming language]
>
> > language. After all the beginners of today are the gurus of
> > tomorrow.
>
> After all, the beginners ...
>
> > The course is only available to teenagers (ages 13 to 19).
> > Considering
>
> The course is available to students in Key Stages 4 and 5. [Try not to
> sound too lecherous, and don't put absolute bounds on the range with
> "only" and specific ages]
>
> > the usually high cost of attending such a course, we hope this
> > kind of scheme will be picked up all around the country. Giving
> > students of all
>
> ... country, giving ...
>
> > financial backgrounds the chance to catch the programming bug.
> >
> >
> > Who are Perl Moungers?
>
> Mongers
>
> > Perl moungers are social groups of Perl programmers. The local
> > group is
>
> [mongers aren't groups; they're people who *may* be members of groups]
>
> Perl Monger groups provide arenas in which Perl programmers may
> communicate both socially and on technical matters, and usually serve
> specific geographical regions.
>
> > Bristol and Bath Perl Moungers ran by Lyle Hopkins. They hold
> > regular
>
> ... Mongers, run by ...
>
> -- 
> Peter Haworth [email protected]
> "I couldn't even find anything to read. The hotel shop
> only had two decent books, and I'd written both of them."
> -- Douglas Adams, the Salmon of Doubt
>
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