Revision: 62204
http://sourceforge.net/p/brlcad/code/62204
Author: carlmoore
Date: 2014-08-18 18:46:11 +0000 (Mon, 18 Aug 2014)
Log Message:
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move parenthesis; notice that 'Device_name' was not at start of sentence;
insert 'see also'; change 'you' to 'your'
Modified Paths:
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brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/brlcad.xml
Modified: brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/brlcad.xml
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--- brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/brlcad.xml 2014-08-18 18:36:59 UTC
(rev 62203)
+++ brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/brlcad.xml 2014-08-18 18:46:11 UTC
(rev 62204)
@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@
models.
See
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>mged</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
-and
+and see also
<emphasis remap='I'>Understanding the Preparation and Analysis of Solid
Models</emphasis>
-by Michael John Muuss (enclosed, in the "paper") directory.</para>
+by Michael John Muuss (enclosed, in the "paper" directory).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@
<emphasis remap='I'>hostname</emphasis>
should not be specified, for performance reasons; just the
special string
-<emphasis remap='I'>Device_name</emphasis>
+<emphasis remap='I'>device_name</emphasis>
is used to select a particular type of framebuffer.
<emphasis remap='I'>Num</emphasis>
is type dependent and can either mean a display number or select
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@
<para>If
<envar>FB_FILE</envar>
-is not set, the default for you system will be used.</para>
+is not set, the default for your system will be used.</para>
<para>The use of
<filename>/dev/</filename>
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