Hi,
HS Rai has left the following comment at Write BRL-CAD News article
on .deb/.rpm builds
http://www.google-melange.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2012/7945213:
A few correction
John,
You did a remarkable work. Just make following corrections:
1) In 2nd paragraph, replace "in" to "on" at two places; as it is "based
on" and not "based in".
2) In 3rd paragraph, replace "working in BRL-CAD" "working with BRL-CAD"
3) In 3rd paragraph, replace "with is advanced Linux experience as his only
companion" with "with his Linux experience (as advanced user) as his only
companion"
4) In 3rd paragraph, I suggest to rephrase following:
By that time, he started colaborating on-line with other BRL-CAD team
members.
Also correct spelling of "collaborating".
5) In 4th paragraph; I suggest to change "Within such a massive project,
with lots of code lines, he decided to take as his responsability the
building of binary packages for Linux systems, since he's not a programmer"
to "With such a massive project, which has millions of lines of code (LOC),
he decided to take responsibility to build binary packages for Linux
System, to put his skills to best use"
I stop here. You got the idea what type of changes I want. I could do it on
my own, as all are of Editorial Type; but I stongly suggest to just read
article, pretending yourself as teacher, and do all such corrections and
modification.
Greetings,
The Google Open Source Programs Team
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