Hi,
Sean has left the following comment at Write an article soliciting a
Windows platform maintainer
http://www.google-melange.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2013/4534595869474816:
tighten
Alex, this is looking good, but can you tighten it up a little bit. You
repeat your points a little bit in the first two paragraphs, so it should
be possible to reduce them without losing any useful information The
subtitle in the middle of your text seems unhelpful as well. The bulleted
list dominates, too, so the article comes across as being an article that
explains maintainership more than soliciting the reader.
Think about what the main point you're trying to make is. Make sure that
point gets the emphasis.
Greetings,
The Google Open Source Programs Team
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