Hi,
brlcad has left the following comment at BRL-CAD Promotional Video #2
http://www.google-melange.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2014/5907948270256128:
have the right idea
Ekamjot, you are definitely on the right track here. However, a few
technical changes will make this really stand out and be useful:
The intro is unnecessary/too long. The initial 25 seconds merely
says "Loading..." and "BRL-CAD". An intro should be no longer than 5
seconds before providing the viewer with useful information.
For better textual content, I suggest looking at
http://en.flossmanuals.net/contributors-guide-to-brl-cad/ where we
summarize useful information right there on the first page (Call to Arms).
Just be careful to decide whether your audience is users or contributors as
that will determine what points you decide to highlight.
You don't want to waste time stating what BRL-CAD is -- that's the first
thing everyone sees when they go to our website. Pretty much all the text
you have now is merely restating our basic overview. You need content that
is not so easily known and not generic in nature.
You have several basic spelling mistakes. That is a show-stopper.
Fix those, and you'll be in a much better position for creating something
we can use to promote the project. If you'd like to upload a text
transcript of what you intend the displayed text to be, we can gladly give
you feedback before you spend time rendering the video.
Greetings,
The Google Open Source Programs Team
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