Hi,
brlcad has left the following comment at CREATE A MOTION TYPOGRAPHY VIDEO
FOR BRL-CAD #6
https://www.google-melange.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2014/5252586642866176:
needs more
Smriti, thank you uploading your work, but this needs more work. First, the
task description asks you to submit an AVI or URL, not a WMV file. Second,
there are numerous typographical and timing errors in the video. The intro
title says "BRL-CAD" for maybe 50 milliseconds before transitioning.
Saying "more than million" is wrong grammar (missing an "a" article) as
is "used thousand a times" -- please proof-read all the text. The ending is
abrupt with the music getting cut off and you don't cite/annotate the
source of that music (which seems to be Dicorhombus, but you don't credit
them anywhere).
On an artistic note, this is not very creative. It's the same information
one can get from the first page of the contributor's guide or even from our
main website. The video should provide information that is not so easily
found. That is why the task lists several sources of background
information, so you can be more creative with the content you present.
Others have already done the "broad overview" of BRL-CAD and they're nearly
all rather mediocre. I suggest coming up with a different transcript and
color scheme.
If you provide a transcript first, we can provide feedback before you spend
time turning it into a video.
Greetings,
The Google Open Source Programs Team
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