From: Alessandro Rubini <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Subject: [patch] documentation typos
Date: Mon, 4 Sep 2000 23:49:38 +0200

> - make explicit that it's only for the PC
> - typo (initiailze)
> - error in "how to specify blocklists" (300->600 should be 300->599)
>       (if this was correct, the previous line was wrong)
> - standard-format dotted-decimal (for IP addresses)
> - removed two newlines in "fstest" table entry, as no other entry
>       in the page has newlines in similar places
> - typo: BIOS indicate  -> BIOS indicates
> - base board memory -> system memory (twice)
> - base board -> motherboard (a few)
> - several changes to one paragraph (about I/O ranges)
> - typo: FE00 -> FEC0
> - typeo: int13, AG-0x41: 01h for 1.0 -> 10h for 1.0 **** I'm not sure ****
> - I -> we (twice: there are two authors)

  Thanks for your effort. I'll apply your patches, but I hope you will
be able to check in further patches yourself soon. :)

> +2000-09-04  Alessandro Rubini  <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> +
> +     * docs/tutorial.texi, docs/prog-ref.texi, docs/user-ref.texi: 
> +     fixed a few typos and minor imprecisions
> +

  This is the only part that I don't like in your patches. Please
follow the convention used in our project. I'll change this to:

2000-09-04  Alessandro Rubini  <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>

            * docs/tutorial.texi: Fixed a few typos and minor
            imprecisions.
            * docs/prog-ref.texi: Likewise.
            * docs/user-ref.texi: Likewise.

Okuji

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