On Fri, Jul 22, 2016 at 06:45:35PM +0200, Tim Kuijsten wrote:
> Index: release.8
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man8/release.8,v
> retrieving revision 1.70
> diff -u -p -r1.70 release.8
> --- release.8   31 Jul 2015 11:30:12 -0000      1.70
> +++ release.8   22 Jul 2016 16:43:58 -0000
> @@ -101,7 +101,8 @@ $ cd PORTSPATH && cvs up -r TAG -Pd
>  .Pp
>  Replace
>  .Va XSRCDIR
> -with the path to your X Window System sources.
> +with the path to your X Window System sources, typically
> +.Pa /usr/xenocara .
>  Replace
>  .Va PORTSPATH
>  with the path to your ports tree sources, typically
> 

i think this is reasonable. we do already document it in this file, but
the organisation is not so great. but if we do this, it allows us to
skip a bit of text earlier in the page.

hence i propose the diff below.
jmc

Index: release.8
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man8/release.8,v
retrieving revision 1.73
diff -u -r1.73 release.8
--- release.8   26 Jun 2016 15:17:43 -0000      1.73
+++ release.8   22 Jul 2016 21:24:24 -0000
@@ -40,13 +40,7 @@
 .Pp
 The following sections describe each of the required steps in detail.
 .Pp
-Commands to be run as a user with write permissions on the source and
-ports trees
-.Pf ( Pa /usr/src
-and
-.Pa /usr/ports
-respectively)
-are preceded by a dollar sign
+Commands to be run as a user are preceded by a dollar sign
 .Pq Sq $ .
 Commands that must be run as the superuser are preceded by a hash mark
 .Pq Sq # .
@@ -101,7 +95,8 @@
 .Pp
 Replace
 .Va XSRCDIR
-with the path to your X Window System sources.
+with the path to your X Window System sources, typically
+.Pa /usr/xenocara .
 Replace
 .Va PORTSPATH
 with the path to your ports tree sources, typically

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