On 2020/08/23 21:57, Uwe Werler wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> spotted some typos:
> 
> Index: tpmr.4
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man4/tpmr.4,v
> retrieving revision 1.7
> diff -u -p -r1.7 tpmr.4
> --- tpmr.4      5 Aug 2020 14:55:40 -0000       1.7
> +++ tpmr.4      23 Aug 2020 21:29:27 -0000
> @@ -25,13 +25,13 @@
>  .Sh DESCRIPTION
>  The
>  .Nm
> -driver implements an 802.1Q (originally 802.1aj) Two-Port MAC Relay
> +driver implements a 802.1Q (originally 802.1aj) Two-Port MAC Relay

8 is pronounced eight which starts with a vowel sound -> "an" is correct

>  (TPMR).
>  A TPMR is a simplified Ethernet bridge that provides a subset of
>  the functionality as found in
>  .Xr bridge 4 .
> -A TPMR has exactly two member ports, and unconditionally relays
> -Ethernet packets between the them.
> +A TPMR has exactly two member ports and unconditionally relays
> +Ethernet packets between them.

"the them" -> "them" is correct of course, I think it reads better with the
comma though

>  .Pp
>  .Nm
>  interfaces can be created at runtime using the
> cvs server: I know nothing about tpmr.4.orig
> 
> -- 
> 
> With kind regards / Með bestu kveðju / Mit freundlichen Grüßen
> 
> Uwe Werler
> 

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