Karen, One minor wording change I'd suggest is to change:
Allows users to create their custom OpenSolaris distributions to either Allows users to create custom OpenSolaris distributions or Allows users to create their own custom OpenSolaris distributions Thanks, Sue On 05/20/09 15:47, Karen Tung wrote: > The following link is the slide I prepared for the Caiman project. > Please review and provide > your comments and suggestions on making it better. > > http://opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/caiman-description.pdf > > Please send your comments before COB Thurs 5/21, the sooner the better. > I want to finish it up and send it to Peter by the end of the week. > > Thanks, > > --Karen > > Dave Miner wrote: >> I'd appreciate a volunteer picking up and doing this for the Caiman >> project. >> >> Thanks, >> Dave >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> >> Subject: >> [facilitation-discuss] Reports from the community for CommunityOne >> From: >> Peter Tribble <peter.tribble at gmail.com> >> Date: >> Fri, 15 May 2009 12:29:54 +0100 >> To: >> facilitation-discuss at opensolaris.org >> >> To: >> facilitation-discuss at opensolaris.org >> >> >> There is a lot of work taking place in the OpenSolaris community. In >> order to inform the OGB, the rest of the community, and those outside >> our community of all the work that's being done, the OGB seeks to >> collect reports from the communities, projects, and user groups that >> make up our community. >> >> For CommunityOne, we seek brief (one-page presentation style) reports >> from community groups, projects, and user groups, highlighting their >> achievements. We aim to display these at CommunityOne, so they must >> make sense in isolation. We also aim to combine them into a single >> presentation that could be used by others. If there is additional >> material - video or images, or full presentations, we would like to >> know about that too; and if there's something you already have there's >> no need to create something new. >> >> Some templates you may wish to use are available at: >> >> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/ogb/Reports/ >> >> Please reply directly to me (Peter Tribble, OGB member). >> >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> >> _______________________________________________ >> caiman-discuss mailing list >> caiman-discuss at opensolaris.org >> http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/caiman-discuss >> > > _______________________________________________ > caiman-discuss mailing list > caiman-discuss at opensolaris.org > http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/caiman-discuss
