Hi Jan,

> Please feel free to take a look and speak up in case
> I missed any comments or misunderstood anything.

all my issues have been adressed, thanks.

On second reading, I've got a couple of questions, mostly related to the
Strategy section.

* 2.2 Automated Installer

  I suppose you can have different service tags within a single SMF
  profile?  Otherwise, I wondered how to e.g. set the
  ttymon/terminal_type property which lives in svc:/system/console-login
  from the profile that sets system/install/config properties.

  2. nodename

  How is this supposed to work?  It doesn't seem practical to have an
  individual SMF profile per client, differing from the (say)
  site-global one only by nodename, especially since the information can
  usually be obtained either from a name service or per DHCP.  Besides,
  changing the nodename requires changes to /etc/inet/hosts, too.  Is
  this already handled by the updated identity:node service?

  And, just out of curiosity, could you share the updated manifest and
  method script for that service?

  3. not yet in SMF

  typo: b*e*ckend

  4. not in SMF

  How is the name service switch configuration supposed to be handled?

* 5 Requirements

  5.1 user account

  expire: typo: password(1) -> passwd(1)

  last line: typo: is need*ed*/desired

  5.2 root account

  expire: password(1) again

* 9 Related bugs, projects

  bug -> CR?

* 10.4.1 Fatal errors

  first bullet: markup: usermod(1M), useradd(1M) -> bold

I know a considerable part of this are nits.  Let me know if we should
better handle this in private mail.

Thanks.
        Rainer

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