Sarah,

Thanks for the updated spec. This review only covers section 6, but there were a few items that I thought worth raising, apologies if they duplicate others, I didn't compare with other comments. I'll look at the rest tomorrow.

page 20: Should the image element also include support for image type (full, user, zone) and properties ("pkg property")?

page 21: I'm still troubled about primary_source and secondary_source in the software spec. It doesn't seem that the schema allows for multiple secondary sources, does it? Would it make sense to merely have a list of source elements and either make primary an attribute or imply it based on order of appearance? One thing I brought up previously that doesn't seem resolved is handling repositories that require key & cert for authentication.

page 26: I think the schema could use comments in each case where the "options" element appears on the expected format of the options for that usage.

page 28: I hadn't reviewed the config section before this version, but I'm wondering whether zones really should be a distinct element, as it appears to be fairly distinct from the other ones (and likely to grow more complexity that might not translate well). Thoughts? A second issue here is what the use case is for a "network" configuration type, as well as "user"? None of the examples show one.

Dave
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