John,

Thanks for the comments.  All taken.  Webrev updated.

(Note, I'm also defining KILL to be /usr/bin/kill, and calling that instead since shell built-in kills may vary in usage. Right now, the default shell used is ksh93, and according to the manpage, its usage is "kill -n signum | -s signame", but does support "kill -sigspec" for backwards compatibility. As to not rely on this, I'm going to change this to /usr/bin/kill to be more explicit. Let me know if anyone has issues with this.)


thanks,
-ethan


On 03/26/11 08:12, John Fischer wrote:
Ethan,

Thanks for correcting the comments. Your changes explain what it being done
much clearer.

All nit comments below. Therefore, if you change them I do not need to see an
updated webrev.

Thanks,

John


===============================================================================
usr/src/cmd/installadm/check-server-setup.sh
===============================================================================
Looks good.
===============================================================================
usr/src/cmd/installadm/installadm-common.sh
===============================================================================
Nit - I would add the word "the" before entry in the following:

1071 printf " Retry after unmounting and deleting"
1072                         printf " entry form /etc/vfstab\n"

Nit - Please change "It's" to "It is" in:

1086 # It's in mnttab, but mounted somewhere else.

===============================================================================
usr/src/cmd/installadm/setup-image.sh
===============================================================================
Looks good.
===============================================================================
usr/src/cmd/installadm/setup-service.sh
===============================================================================
Nit - I would add the word "an" before error in the following:

  84 # function to return error.

Nit - I would reword the following:

123 print "Warning: The service ${name} could not be registered"

To something like:

print "Warning: mDNS registry of service ${name} could not be verified."


===============================================================================
usr/src/cmd/installadm/svc-install-server
===============================================================================
Looks good.
===============================================================================

On 03/25/11 08:51 PM, Ethan Quach wrote:
Can I get a review for the following bugs:


BugIDs:
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http://bugs.opensolaris.org/bugdatabase/view_bug.do?bug_id=7029179
http://bugs.opensolaris.org/bugdatabase/view_bug.do?bug_id=7027956
http://bugs.opensolaris.org/bugdatabase/view_bug.do?bug_id=7024643

Webrev:
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http://cr.opensolaris.org/~equach/webrev.7029179.7027956.7024643/


thanks,
-ethan

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