Hello Giorgio, I've taken a quick glance, and everything seems correct at first glance. However, I wonder what the point of this writeup is? If it is meant to be an introduction/descriptions of cordova to users, then I suspect it is not worth focusing on where the name cordova comes from, or why the apache foundation was specifically chosen and so on. At least not at the very start of the description (you could offer references to these facts at the bottom, perhaps).
If I was reading this writeup as a novice, I would appreciate knowing the those technical details you outlined, and the bit of history you added, but more importantly, I'de like to know why I would want to use cordova and what it would mean if I did. I think you should touch on cordova vs native vs pure mobile etc. Good luck! -Michal On Fri, Oct 12, 2012 at 12:52 AM, Giorgio Natili <g.nat...@gnstudio.com>wrote: > Hi All, > > I started a page about PhoneGap on webplatform.org > http://docs.webplatform.org/wiki/mobile_web/PhoneGap, it's still marked as > 'incomplete' because I would like to get your feedback and some suggestion > about which other topics can be covered in the page. > > I also would like to create one about ripple so any suggestion is more > than welcome. > > Cheers, > Giorgio > > >
