On 26 April 2011 16:06, Inge Wallin <[email protected]> wrote: > On Tuesday, April 26, 2011 16:00:52 Inge Wallin wrote: >> Here is a first draft of the announcement of snapshot 1. I have already >> had some feedback from Cyrille that I incorporated. >> >> Please comment on the overall structure (is this what we want to focus on?) >> as well as the actual content. Also remember that this is a first draft >> that will be polished over the next few days. >> >> When we have the screenshots and visual tour on the website, I will also >> add references to those. >> >> -Inge > > Based on feedback from my first draft, I have embellished it a bit. Here is a > longer version. :-P
Nice work! First, one thing: I'd like to propose to have two messages: to users and developers. Only the latter would mention GUI/engine separation and stuff like that. If we start doing the separation for any announcement, we can escape from the 'geek' area. Simple test: just give the text to read to your family and see what's a like black magic to them, then improve incrementally. -- regards / pozdrawiam, Jaroslaw Staniek http://www.linkedin.com/in/jstaniek Kexi & Calligra (kexi-project.org, identi.ca/kexi, calligra-suite.org) KDE Software Development Platform on MS Windows (windows.kde.org) _______________________________________________ calligra-devel mailing list [email protected] https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/calligra-devel
