Dear lok Freedom, I don't see anything wrong with this poem, the whole poem is composed with 8 words be cause it is a " 8-word poem, bott Peak Prambei ". KC Khoar Chev ( Made in Cambodia )
--- On Thu, 10/8/09, Freedom <[email protected]> wrote: From: Freedom <[email protected]> Subject: Re: Peak Pram Bey: Euy Khmer Neak Pheach Khluon by KVS To: [email protected] Date: Thursday, October 8, 2009, 1:29 AM Dear Ta Prum, Thank u for the attached poem. Although its text is beautiful, nevertheless I think it's wrongly written for the author didn't respect too much the khmer poem composition rule of "Peak Pram Pee (7 words poem rule)", ie. almost all the sentences are composed of 8 words ! Regards, Freedom On Thu, Oct 8, 2009 at 4:57 AM, Ta Prum <[email protected]> wrote: Dear Friends: Attached, please find the poem. Warmest regards, --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Cambodia Discussion (CAMDISC) - www.cambodia.org" group. This is an unmoderated forum. Please refrain from using foul language. Thank you for your understanding. Peace among us and in Cambodia. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/camdisc Learn more - http://www.cambodia.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---

