Seems to me a bit odd that the link "http://dev.catalystframework.org/wiki/releaseannouncements/58pressrelease/whymoose";
follows the line "These new features also give the Catalyst team a better base for extending the framework into the future." Why confuse things with moose when the focus is a new and improved version of catalyst? -- Kiffin Gish <[email protected]> On Fri, 2009-04-24 at 08:56 +0100, Iain wrote: > On Thu, 2009-04-23 at 08:46 -0700, John Napiorkowski wrote: > > Hi, > > > > I'm seeking feedback on: > > http://dev.catalystframework.org/wiki/releaseannouncements > > > > And in particular my first swing at something we can use as a press release > > and send to all the usual suspect (Slashdot, Digg, etc): > > http://dev.catalystframework.org/wiki/releaseannouncements/58pressrelease > > > > I could really use your feedback. This version has some placeholders for > > data I am trying to get but the verbiage is a bit too long I think. > > Anyway, please take a look, keep in mind this is something aimed for > > general release. It's probably still too technical. Thoughts, > > suggestions, abuse welcome. > > > > When it's done, I am hope we can get lots of people linking to it as far > > and wide as possible. We put a lot of effort into this code and we deserve > > recognition. > > > > John > > If you are aiming for a wide audience you need to assume that they have > never heard of catalyst let alone version 5.8. Therefore they will want > to know what it is and who is using it in the first few lines. > > so > > "Catalyst is the premier web development framework for Perl" > > and > > "More and more companies are turning to Catalyst as a core web > application technology. Many of these websites, such as XXX, comfortable > scale to XXX unique page views daily" > > would be good hooks to draw people in. > > <2p/> > > Iain. > > > _______________________________________________ > List: [email protected] > Listinfo: http://lists.scsys.co.uk/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/catalyst > Searchable archive: http://www.mail-archive.com/[email protected]/ > Dev site: http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/ _______________________________________________ List: [email protected] Listinfo: http://lists.scsys.co.uk/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/catalyst Searchable archive: http://www.mail-archive.com/[email protected]/ Dev site: http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/
