I find the paragraphs too long on the new page. On the old page you kind of read them automatically, whereas the new one makes me say, oh, lots of stuff, don't have time to read it right now. Fewer exclamation marks might be good though, as someone said.
Also, this is a bit hard to explain but the new page shows the cook (happy) and the old page showed customers (happy) and after all which is the point you want to make, hmm? Neither here nor there... on the old page you have "dinners ready"... if you use this on the new page this should be "dinner's ready." Dana On 5/24/05, Tony Weeg <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > ok... new menu interface request from the wife. AFTER SHE ok'd THE > FIRST DESIGN!!!! > > :) i love her! > > heres the page progression: > > (old splash page) > http://www.mydinnercompany.com/ > > (old inside page) > http://www.mydinnercompany.com/aboutUs.cfm > > now.... > > (new inside pages idea below) > http://www.mydinnercompany.com/website_Interface_innerPages_version2.jpg > > good idea? less hectic of a design? > > any input is appreciated :) > > -- > tony > > Tony Weeg > > macromedia certified coldfusion mx developer > email: tonyweeg [at] gmail [dot] com > blog: http://www.revolutionwebdesign.com/blog/ > cool tool: http://www.antiwrap.com > > "...straight cash homey" > - randy moss, now a raider > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Find out how CFTicket can increase your company's customer support efficiency by 100% http://www.houseoffusion.com/banners/view.cfm?bannerid=49 Message: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=i:5:158779 Archives: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/threads.cfm/5 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=s:5 Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=89.70.5 Donations & Support: http://www.houseoffusion.com/tiny.cfm/54
