I second the keep it to one page. I have been told that if you are going for anything less grandiose than university president one page is best, two pages max. I personally hate more than one page. Use simple words and concrete descriptions. Deanna's point about consistency is also very well taken. As, this is probably nitpicking but there is no accent on the first e in resume. I would not have even bothered to click to be honest, not that I am in the market for a developer right now. It really bugs me that you capitalize Intranet but not Flash. If I were a Linux shop that would shoot you down right there. What is an immersive site? You may have a fine arts background but if it's from a college don't you mean a degree? If no degree, use coursework. Check subject verb agreement in this sentence. Forget target job and target company in resumes you will send out. Decide whether you are going to capitalize ColdFusion and how. Get rid of the ampersands, too casual for a resume, and thought the application familiarity is good info, yes, it should be a paragraph and not a chart from Monster.
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