Paul ok, just off the top of my head, in a resume, you really really want to capitalize "I" especially if you are going to capitalize "Intranet" which I would not btw, though that is a small point. I really don't think you mean immersive, if you do please explain. Grammar error here: I have a fine arts background from Columbus College of Art & Design, and uses this for clean, well-designed sites. Also, if you did not graduate, say "attended." I dislike ". With a close eye on design using Flash & Fireworks, i can add interfaces with user manageable content." What does with a close eye on design add to the sentence? Why is all of this in "objective"? In this paragraph and elsewhere: Design of floor plans, using Photoshop and Fireworks based off of CAD drawings sent in by the client. Coding to these floor plans pick a voice (noun, past tense, whatever) and stick to it, ie Designed floor plans, using Photoshop and Fireworks based off of CAD drawings sent in by the client. Coded to these floor plans or Design of floor plans, using Photoshop and Fireworks based off of CAD drawings sent in by the client. Code to these floor plans the point being, do all your actions the same way. I would not use gerunds (ing words). OK now in
*NBBJ* <http://www.nbbj.com/> 1/28/1998 - 9/30/2002 Web Developer Creatively developed web based applications using ColdFusion, HTML, Flash and Fireworks that helped to empower the employees of NBBJ to effectively complete their tasks. Such as employee tracking application of location email addresses, photos that then tie in to educational applications for scheduling classes, conference rooms or other resources with in the firm. Designed web sites and video to deliver the process of architecture to the client in an effective and entertaining manner. Developed many data driven applications pulling from SQL Server and or Access data basses. the first sentence strikes me as complete jargon. The second sentence is incomplete. How about "Developed web-based applications using ColdFusion, HTML, Flash and Fireworks such as employee tracking, and educational applications for scheduling classes...." I left the photos out of my suggestion because I did not understand why they were there, and they are definitely not applications. *O'LearyIllistration * <http://www.olearyillistration.com/> 10/21/2005 http://www.olearyillistration.com Site design for a Columbus Ohio, Illustrator. Taking his designs creating a photo album so that he can quickly get his images to the publishing community. is that really the url? If it's really mispelled like that I'd leave it off so you don't have to explain that this was not your doing. How about "Created a photo album to client specifications allowing him to quickly disseminate his images"? Hope that helps a bit. If I can find time later I will look at this some more. Dana -- In the long run we are all dead. - John Maynard Keynes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Find out how CFTicket can increase your company's customer support efficiency by 100% http://www.houseoffusion.com/banners/view.cfm?bannerid=49 Message: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=i:5:177944 Archives: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/threads.cfm/5 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=s:5 Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=11502.10531.5 Donations & Support: http://www.houseoffusion.com/tiny.cfm/54
