Overall, stable and stolid and safe

Which are good feeling for a firm site.

colors: good. font, old feeling and rich: good. page structure: good. eye
focus points: good. vital information covered: good.

Overall, keep going.
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Stop reading here unless specifics are desired


the two y's hanging down bwlow the second line seem lonely. i want something
on the right to also intrude into that space, to make the line crossing less
accidental.

the main firm font with the firm name is a bit too stretched out. maybe some
kerning would help. i want the webb at the front to have a touch more
gutter, more like the distance from W to the top of the page.

the button on the right contact us is like 1 pix too low, and there is
unbalance tension below the phone # to the line

the g in planning is badly positioned (looks like a y)

the center box and its text might not have enough contrast for color
impaired folk. or grey screen readers.

the little golem looking guy on the left needs more face, he is the only one
cut off, and it is weird. and the one pixel white dot behind the right girls
hair stands out.

We practice in house text. We needs a cap W.

2009/4/2 Tony <[email protected]>

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> http://www.tonyweeg.com/clients/webb/idea4.png
>
> whatcha think of this one?
>
> generally, not little things... just overall impression.
>
> thanks!
>
> 

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